Submission-Ready Essay Intensive Review
Line-by-line editing with unlimited revision rounds until every essay is ready to submit.
The Problem This Solves
I'm not simply checking grammar or making the writing sound prettier. I'm reviewing each essay from an admissions strategy perspective: does it reveal something meaningful about the student, does it add a new dimension to the application, is the strongest material getting enough attention, and do the essays work together rather than repeating the same qualities and stories. For UC applicants, I also look at the PIQs as a complete set, help identify the strongest four, and consider what each one contributes to the overall picture of the student.
The goal isn't to turn the essays into my writing. It's to preserve the student's authentic voice while helping them communicate their story as clearly, powerfully, and strategically as possible.
What's Included
- Personal Statement + all supplements for one school OR complete UC PIQ set
- Unlimited revision rounds through final draft
- Line-by-line editing: specific cuts, replacement language, and structural fixes, not just margin comments
- For UC applicants: review of up to 5 completed PIQ drafts, with help selecting the strongest four
- Strategic feedback on story, structure, voice, and whether the essays work together as a set
- Delivered as detailed written markup, often longer than the essay itself
Who It's For
Students with complete essay drafts who want an experienced second set of eyes for detailed, line-by-line editing before they submit.
Common Questions
What exactly is covered?
How many rounds of revision are included?
How is this different from a strategic review?
Will my student's essays end up sounding like you instead of them?
What if my student's drafts aren't finished yet?
Is there a refund policy?
“Jenny's notes on my daughter's personal statement were longer than the essay itself. We went through three rounds, and the final draft barely resembled the one we sent her. It finally sounded like her, just sharper.”
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After your purchase, you'll receive instructions on where to submit your essay drafts. Expect detailed, line-by-line feedback, with revision rounds continuing until every essay is ready to submit.
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