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Submission-Ready Essay Intensive Review
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Line-by-line editing for your Common App essays or your full UC PIQ set, with unlimited revision rounds until every essay is ready to submit.

Submission-Ready Essay Intensive Review

If your student already has complete drafts and wants an experienced second set of eyes before hitting submit, this is the service for that final, critical stage. I'll personally review your student's essays line by line, looking at both the big picture and the smallest details: the story being told, what the essay reveals about the student, structure, clarity, voice, word choice, pacing, and whether every sentence is earning its place. This isn't a review where you get a few margin comments and are left to figure out what to do next. I get specific: pointing out what isn't working, cutting sentences or sections that weaken the essay, suggesting replacement language, and showing exactly where and how the writing can get stronger. The feedback is honest and unsparing: if a sentence, a paragraph, or an opening line isn't working, I'll say so, cross it out, and write in what should replace it, not soften it into a vague comment. The feedback I give is sometimes longer than the essay itself.

  • Personal Statement + all supplements for one school OR complete UC PIQ set
  • Unlimited revision rounds through final draft
  • Every round of feedback, including the first, comes back within 1-2 business days
  • Honest, line-by-line editing: sentences that aren't working get crossed out and replaced with specific language, not just flagged in a margin comment
Complete Common App Review + 1 School
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One expert pass over the entire shared Common App, plus everything school-specific for one college on your list.

Complete Common App Review + 1 School

The Common App has two layers: the shared application (activities, honors, testing, personal statement, additional information) that carries over to every school on your list, and a school-specific layer of program selections, short answers, and supplements that's different for every college. This review covers both: a full read of your shared Common App, plus a complete review of one college's specific requirements, so you walk away with one fully reviewed application ready to submit and a stronger shared foundation for every other school you're applying to.

  • Full review of the shared Common App: education, testing, activities list, honors, personal statement, and additional information
  • Specific suggested rewrites for weak activities list entries: exact phrasing that fits the character limit, not just a note that it needs work
  • An assessment of how the shared application reads as a whole: does it tell one coherent story?
  • Complete review of one college's school-specific section: program or major selection, short answers, and supplemental essays
Priority Review Fast Pass
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Skip the queue. Get same-day feedback. Stay ahead of your deadlines.

Priority Review Fast Pass

My review queue is especially full as the November 1 deadline approaches. My standard turnaround is about 3 business days, but many students need multiple rounds of feedback before their essays and applications are truly submission-ready, and waiting three days between revisions eats up valuable time. The Fast Pass puts every essay you send me at the front of my queue, for every round of revision, so you get your feedback back the same day or within 24 hours, with more time to revise before your deadline.

This is an expedited turnaround upgrade to a separately purchased review service. It does not include additional reviews.

  • Same-day feedback for anything you submit before 5pm your local time
  • Feedback within 24 hours for anything you submit after 5pm your local time
  • Priority placement at the front of my review queue, on every revision round of every essay
  • More time to revise and refine your work before your application deadlines
Scholarship & Summer Program Application Accelerator
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Stand Out in Competitive Scholarships, Summer Programs & Research Opportunities

Scholarship & Summer Program Application Accelerator

Applying to a competitive scholarship, selective summer program, or research opportunity? For $497, I will review your student's entire application, including every required essay and written application component, research what the program values in successful candidates, and provide a personalized strategy to help your student put forward their strongest possible application.

  • Program-specific research: publicly available successful applicant examples, selection criteria, and program priorities
  • Complete review of all essays, short answers, and written application components for one scholarship or summer program
  • Personalized positioning strategy tailored to your student's strengths and the specific opportunity
  • Application-wide narrative review so every component works together
College Interview Prep

Walk into your college interview confident, prepared, and ready to stand out.

College Interview Prep

A comprehensive interview preparation experience with Jenny, covering strategy, practice, and live feedback so your student shows up as their best self.

  • Interview strategy session: how top schools evaluate candidates in person
  • Full mock interview with realistic questions
  • Live feedback on answers, delivery, and presence
  • Personalized question bank based on your student's profile and target schools
The College List Reality Check
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Is your student applying to the right schools?

The College List Reality Check

Many families build a college list based on rankings, reputation, or overall acceptance rates, without realizing that major choice, academic profile, extracurriculars, testing, and admissions narrative can dramatically change the strategy.

The College List Reality Check gives you a personalized report that helps identify hidden risks, missed opportunities, and ways to strengthen your student's college list before applications are submitted.

This is not a generic "chance me" calculator. It's a personalized admissions strategy assessment designed to help your family make smarter, more confident decisions before application season.

  • Whether your list has the right mix of reach, target, and likely schools
  • Whether certain majors make specific colleges more competitive
  • Whether your student's activities support their intended academic direction
  • Whether the list aligns with your student's strongest admissions story
1-on-1 Consulting: Live Strategy Session
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Stop guessing. In one hour, an MIT alumni interviewer tells you where your student really stands and exactly what to do next.

1-on-1 Consulting: Live Strategy Session

A private, live strategy session with Jenny for students and parents who want direct, personalized guidance from a 10+ year MIT admissions interviewer.

  • 60-minute private, live session with Jenny, an MIT alumni interviewer with 10+ years of experience (parent, student, or the whole family together is fine)
  • Use it your way: a full strategy deep-dive, a live edit of your Common App activities list, an essay angle brainstorm, or an admissions likelihood assessment of your school list
  • No prep required: just book, show up with your questions, and we spend the hour on strategy
  • An honest assessment of where your student stands today, including what's helping and what's quietly hurting
Jenny's Inner Circle
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Done-with-you college admissions support, without the five-figure consultant price tag.

Jenny's Inner Circle

Jenny's Inner Circle is structured, personalized guidance through the entire admissions cycle. You start with a 1-on-1 strategy call that produces your student's Personal Narrative Blueprint, then move through a complete essay course with feedback, five essay reviews, a full application review, monthly masterclasses, and ongoing support through waitlists and financial aid. One payment. Lifetime access.

  • 1-hour strategy call + Personal Narrative Blueprint
  • Full essay writing course with feedback
  • 5 essay reviews + 1 complete application review
  • Monthly masterclasses on timely admissions topics
Summer Positioning Strategy + Project Viability Review

Get expert eyes on your student's summer direction before you commit to the wrong one.

Summer Positioning Strategy + Project Viability Review

Not sure if your student's summer idea is the right one to pursue? Get a personalized strategic review that identifies which direction has the strongest admissions potential, what feels authentic vs. resume padding, what can realistically become impressive in one summer, and how to position the project into a compelling long-term narrative.

  • Which summer direction has the strongest admissions potential
  • What feels authentic vs. "resume padding"
  • What can realistically become impressive in one summer
  • How to position the project into a compelling long-term narrative

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